2. Stories need to be structured because the more organized, the better. It's good to organize parts of your story so it will avoid possible confusion. Unless if it isn't free write or writing with no format, than a person that is writing a story should follow by the way of the plot diagram or the order of the plot to the fact that it must include all the factors of those steps of the story structure. It should be that way so that readers can get a clear picture of how things were led to that and that it can be good for story analysis and so forth understanding the story well. Also, it might not sound interesting if a story has one or a few of the steps missing and also it might not make sense. It reveals that our need, as humans to, construct understanding has been improved and good. It is improved and good to the fact that it allows writers to make understanding better and makes a story more complete.
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Friday, August 28, 2009
Jesus
1. The one who is the true light, who gives light to everyone, was coming into the world.
2. But to all who believed in him and accepted, he gave the right to become children of God.
3. He was full of unfailing love and faithfulness.
4. And we have seen his glory, the glory of the Father's one and only son.
5. From his abundance we hace all received one gracious blessing after another.
6. But the one and only son is himself God and is near to the father's heart.
These details in Christs life relate to his preachings to people, he saving people from death and suffering by his great power, and his death and ressurection.
2. But to all who believed in him and accepted, he gave the right to become children of God.
3. He was full of unfailing love and faithfulness.
4. And we have seen his glory, the glory of the Father's one and only son.
5. From his abundance we hace all received one gracious blessing after another.
6. But the one and only son is himself God and is near to the father's heart.
These details in Christs life relate to his preachings to people, he saving people from death and suffering by his great power, and his death and ressurection.
Marigolds connections
1. In the story Marigolds, it states that “Surely there must have been lush green lawns and paved streets under leafy shade trees somewhere in town; but memory is an abstract painting—it does not present things as they are, but rather as they feel.” Sometimes when I remember back in time, I get a lot of how it felt. I sometimes want to have those days again. Also, sometimes I have feelings for something which may not be the same with what it is.
2. Lizabeth destroyed Lottie’s garden of Marigolds. She later finds out that she was being watched. I once did something bad on the elevator but it didn’t know that there was a CCTV installed in the elevator.
3. Joey, Lizabeth, and other kids, did bad stuff by throwing rocks onto Lottie’s garden. I at times threw eggs out of the window in means to hit someone outside. Also I did bad stuff with my friends in the condominium.
4. The narrator states that she feels nostalgia when it come to remembering the marigolds. I get a bit of nostalgia when I remember about things of eh past.
5. I states that Lizabeth and Joey were youngsters of the family while the rest were sent to marriage. From 3rd grade, I was alone with my parents while my sisters were gone to university.
6. Lizabeth felt scared when she watched her parents argue and her dad cry. I was in fear too when my parents wee fighting.
2. Lizabeth destroyed Lottie’s garden of Marigolds. She later finds out that she was being watched. I once did something bad on the elevator but it didn’t know that there was a CCTV installed in the elevator.
3. Joey, Lizabeth, and other kids, did bad stuff by throwing rocks onto Lottie’s garden. I at times threw eggs out of the window in means to hit someone outside. Also I did bad stuff with my friends in the condominium.
4. The narrator states that she feels nostalgia when it come to remembering the marigolds. I get a bit of nostalgia when I remember about things of eh past.
5. I states that Lizabeth and Joey were youngsters of the family while the rest were sent to marriage. From 3rd grade, I was alone with my parents while my sisters were gone to university.
6. Lizabeth felt scared when she watched her parents argue and her dad cry. I was in fear too when my parents wee fighting.
Short Story
My story is based on a historical drama that aired on 2000. I forgot many parts to it so it may be different.
In the 800's AD, the Unified Silla Kingdom of Korea is declining. It is on its way to downfall. Many people were starving, many chose to be gangs that steal food and goods, and many were disloyal towards the Silla government and rebelled. In the midst of all this was Gungye of the Silla royal house, Wanggun of Songak (Gaesong) and Gyeonhwon in the Southwest. Gungye was ordered to be killed so he fled and was placed in Saedalsa and worshipped Buddha. He would one day think of himself and eventually tell someone that he was the Mireuk (something very high in Buddhism). Along with his freind, he set out to the outside world and helped many people, gaining fame in teh process. He became freinds with some who would become his generals and started building his army. Gyeonhwon was a son of Ajagae. Even in his early days he showed great strength and loved combat. At the age of fifteen he called himself Gyeonhwon an joined the Silla military nad later became a general. As he was sent to the Southwestern region, he brought rebel leaders to his control and brought peasants to his cause. One day, he striked Mujinju (Gwangju) and established Later Baekje. The reason why its called that way is because there was a fallen Kingdom callde Baekje before, and its that Gyeonhwon's will was to revive it. He later moved the capital to Wansan (Jeonju). Gungye, after realizing this, striked the northern territories of Unified Silla and named his nation Later Goguryeo. He later named it Majin, and then Taebong. By doing so, he earned a special man, a man named Wanggun. Wanggun was a son of Wangryoong, a great merchant of Songak (Gaesong) and from his early days travelled to surrounding nations. When he was born, there was a great symbolic sign, a sign that shows that he would bcome a great man. Soon, the revived nations of Goguryeo and one that of Baekje would fight for the supremacy of the territory south of Balhae. This part is the expositoin because it mentions the main characters, the setting and the main conflict.
Gyeonhwon and Gungye's ambitions were to unite the later three Kingdoms. Gungye's dream was even further than that. He wanted to conquer up north into Manchuria just as Goguryeo once did. Gyeonhwon wanted to glorify his Later Baekje an avenge the last king of Baekje, Uija. Wanggun became a general and led succesful engagements against Later Baekje. He was very popular among the people, even Ajagae admired him and Gunye considered him as his brother. Gungye turned evil and had to be removed. Wanggun was chosen as king and established his Goguryeo Kingdom called Goryeo in 918. Goryeo and Later Baekje battled. Silla was a weakling.
This part is the rising action because the conflicts are developed. The rulers have their dreams which result to war.
Gyeonhwon among all his offspring liked his fourth son Geumgang the most. One day he chose him as the chosen crown prince of Later Baekje. Many people of the government of Later Baekje did not like this for they preferred Shingum, the eldest son of Gyeonhwon. As for Shingum. he was feeling raging jealousy and unfairness and along with two other sons of Gyeonhwon, Yanggum and Yonggum, decided to bring about a coup. Mant generals joined them and killed Pajinchan, a important government person and tactician as well as their obvious target, Geumgang. Gyeonhwon was in a stunning rage after he found out the deed. Unfortunatley, he was placed in Geumsansa, and the ruler of Later Baekje was Shingum. Influenced by someone high in Buddhism, Gyeonhwon decided to something that would end the existence of Later Baekje. He fled to Goryeo. There he was suprisingly welcomed by Wanggun and Wanggun influencd by Gyeonhwon, he decided to attack Later Baekje with a force of 100,000.
This part is the climax because Gyeonhwon flees to Goryeo, a turining point in the story. Also the main character, Wanggun changes by welcoming his sworn enemy.
The forces of Later Baekje and Goryeo met in Seonsan Gumi. Many of the Later Baekje forces lost morale as they saw their king in the Goryeo army and submitted. The battle was a piece of cake for Goryeo. Shingum retreated and the last movement of his army was put down by a Goryeo ambush. After much thought, Shingum surrendered to Goryeo. Neungae, his uncle, Ichan, and a general were executed. The drama tells that it might have been the same for Shingum and his exiled brothers Yanggum and Yonggum. Thus it marked the end of Later Baekje at the year of 936. This part is the falling action because the conflict is taken care of . Later Baekje fell.
Before the fall of Goryeo's rival, Silla had submitted to Wanggun's kingdom for King Gyeongsun could not rule and the kingdom lost all its strength. Before that, Balhae, another succesor state of Goguryeo fell to the Khitans and many sought refuge to Goryeo and they were warmly 's welcomed and became assimilate to the Goryeo population. So Wanggun's Goryeo achieved a full unification, one that would go on uintil the year 1392. From 1392, the dynasty would be different, but Korean people would still be ruled under one single entity until 1910. This part is a resolutoin because it comes to a reasonble ending.
The conflict of this story is that Later Baekje and two revived kingdoms of Goryeo do most of the battle to dominate the territory south of Balhae. The kingdoms stem from the will of men who wanted to revive fallen nations for Silla was weakening too much and they knew it would fall by itself.
In the 800's AD, the Unified Silla Kingdom of Korea is declining. It is on its way to downfall. Many people were starving, many chose to be gangs that steal food and goods, and many were disloyal towards the Silla government and rebelled. In the midst of all this was Gungye of the Silla royal house, Wanggun of Songak (Gaesong) and Gyeonhwon in the Southwest. Gungye was ordered to be killed so he fled and was placed in Saedalsa and worshipped Buddha. He would one day think of himself and eventually tell someone that he was the Mireuk (something very high in Buddhism). Along with his freind, he set out to the outside world and helped many people, gaining fame in teh process. He became freinds with some who would become his generals and started building his army. Gyeonhwon was a son of Ajagae. Even in his early days he showed great strength and loved combat. At the age of fifteen he called himself Gyeonhwon an joined the Silla military nad later became a general. As he was sent to the Southwestern region, he brought rebel leaders to his control and brought peasants to his cause. One day, he striked Mujinju (Gwangju) and established Later Baekje. The reason why its called that way is because there was a fallen Kingdom callde Baekje before, and its that Gyeonhwon's will was to revive it. He later moved the capital to Wansan (Jeonju). Gungye, after realizing this, striked the northern territories of Unified Silla and named his nation Later Goguryeo. He later named it Majin, and then Taebong. By doing so, he earned a special man, a man named Wanggun. Wanggun was a son of Wangryoong, a great merchant of Songak (Gaesong) and from his early days travelled to surrounding nations. When he was born, there was a great symbolic sign, a sign that shows that he would bcome a great man. Soon, the revived nations of Goguryeo and one that of Baekje would fight for the supremacy of the territory south of Balhae. This part is the expositoin because it mentions the main characters, the setting and the main conflict.
Gyeonhwon and Gungye's ambitions were to unite the later three Kingdoms. Gungye's dream was even further than that. He wanted to conquer up north into Manchuria just as Goguryeo once did. Gyeonhwon wanted to glorify his Later Baekje an avenge the last king of Baekje, Uija. Wanggun became a general and led succesful engagements against Later Baekje. He was very popular among the people, even Ajagae admired him and Gunye considered him as his brother. Gungye turned evil and had to be removed. Wanggun was chosen as king and established his Goguryeo Kingdom called Goryeo in 918. Goryeo and Later Baekje battled. Silla was a weakling.
This part is the rising action because the conflicts are developed. The rulers have their dreams which result to war.
Gyeonhwon among all his offspring liked his fourth son Geumgang the most. One day he chose him as the chosen crown prince of Later Baekje. Many people of the government of Later Baekje did not like this for they preferred Shingum, the eldest son of Gyeonhwon. As for Shingum. he was feeling raging jealousy and unfairness and along with two other sons of Gyeonhwon, Yanggum and Yonggum, decided to bring about a coup. Mant generals joined them and killed Pajinchan, a important government person and tactician as well as their obvious target, Geumgang. Gyeonhwon was in a stunning rage after he found out the deed. Unfortunatley, he was placed in Geumsansa, and the ruler of Later Baekje was Shingum. Influenced by someone high in Buddhism, Gyeonhwon decided to something that would end the existence of Later Baekje. He fled to Goryeo. There he was suprisingly welcomed by Wanggun and Wanggun influencd by Gyeonhwon, he decided to attack Later Baekje with a force of 100,000.
This part is the climax because Gyeonhwon flees to Goryeo, a turining point in the story. Also the main character, Wanggun changes by welcoming his sworn enemy.
The forces of Later Baekje and Goryeo met in Seonsan Gumi. Many of the Later Baekje forces lost morale as they saw their king in the Goryeo army and submitted. The battle was a piece of cake for Goryeo. Shingum retreated and the last movement of his army was put down by a Goryeo ambush. After much thought, Shingum surrendered to Goryeo. Neungae, his uncle, Ichan, and a general were executed. The drama tells that it might have been the same for Shingum and his exiled brothers Yanggum and Yonggum. Thus it marked the end of Later Baekje at the year of 936. This part is the falling action because the conflict is taken care of . Later Baekje fell.
Before the fall of Goryeo's rival, Silla had submitted to Wanggun's kingdom for King Gyeongsun could not rule and the kingdom lost all its strength. Before that, Balhae, another succesor state of Goguryeo fell to the Khitans and many sought refuge to Goryeo and they were warmly 's welcomed and became assimilate to the Goryeo population. So Wanggun's Goryeo achieved a full unification, one that would go on uintil the year 1392. From 1392, the dynasty would be different, but Korean people would still be ruled under one single entity until 1910. This part is a resolutoin because it comes to a reasonble ending.
The conflict of this story is that Later Baekje and two revived kingdoms of Goryeo do most of the battle to dominate the territory south of Balhae. The kingdoms stem from the will of men who wanted to revive fallen nations for Silla was weakening too much and they knew it would fall by itself.
Saturday, August 15, 2009
I like to read about historical things that i like of. Sometimes, reading about it can make me feel better when i had a bad day, and sometimes it makes feel good. I also like to read about fantasy-adventure books. When I say "fantasy", I don't mean any type of fantasy but like the Lord of the Rings, and the Redwall series. I feel a very adventurous spark, esspecially when it comes to the Redwall series.
In the past, I use to read while lying down in bed because it was more comfortable. But sometimes I would fall asleep. Nowadays, I read not by lying down. I don't need to be in a particular place for myself to read. I don't listen to music when i read for I think that it doesn't make me concentrate, I don't need to be eating or drinking as I read.
I think that they should make movies for only those ones that are really fun or meaningful because its good to have fun and you get to think more after you were introduced into a meaningful thing. I think that perhaps, they should ask the author permission, because perhaps, the author may not be pleased and feel really shy of when they find out that their work has been made into a movie.
In the past, I use to read while lying down in bed because it was more comfortable. But sometimes I would fall asleep. Nowadays, I read not by lying down. I don't need to be in a particular place for myself to read. I don't listen to music when i read for I think that it doesn't make me concentrate, I don't need to be eating or drinking as I read.
I think that they should make movies for only those ones that are really fun or meaningful because its good to have fun and you get to think more after you were introduced into a meaningful thing. I think that perhaps, they should ask the author permission, because perhaps, the author may not be pleased and feel really shy of when they find out that their work has been made into a movie.
The last five things that I've read was a graphic, physical comparison of Lions and Tigers, stuff about Sumatran Tigers, information about Tigers, a book about Korea, and about Chemistry.
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